The Lion's golden, sleek fur glistened in the warm sunlight. She could smell the fresh, clean scent of a zebra munching on grass nearby. The lion dived into a hunting position and breathed in some of the damp air. She slashed her tail from side to side, as she gently creeped up on the plump, stripy creature.
2 comments:
Elly Mae this is a really beautiful paragraph. I can see this lion.
I love this piece of writing Elly Mae!! The description is fantastic and I can picture the scene in my head! Great work! :)
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