This is my Flanders Field poem, I hope you like it.
Our rotting hearts in shallow graves,
Send over a melancholy wave.
Hearts are broken, love is lost,
Soldiers in war paid a terrible cost.
Remember us in Flanders Fields.
This is my Flanders Field art.
Our rotting hearts in shallow graves,
Send over a melancholy wave.
Hearts are broken, love is lost,
Soldiers in war paid a terrible cost.
Remember us in Flanders Fields.
This is my Flanders Field art.
3 comments:
Wow. I love this poem, it really affects me. You kick a really BIG one with the first line. Then the subtle sadness of the rest serves to make that first line kick harder. I think you are an amazing poet. I would like to see you write more poetry :-)
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